You have been invited you to this private listening of what I think can become a hit song for Bobby Soul. I have added a tenor saxophone track to give move of an idea of what I feel this song needs as far as added melody in the production.
Although it does present well as an electronica song I feel it could benefit from a more natural and acoustic sound and recorded in a professional studio.
I am hoping to entice investors so that this song, when we can and the pandemic restrictions will allow, record this in a proper studio with quality microphones and gear, with more real musicians as opposed to the electronic tracks. More of a Soul Jazz vibe.
lyrics
The swish of the leaves and I hear music - The sound of my feet and I hear music - A man on the bench (that's me) talking to him self - In the silence of the dawn I hear music - The sirens in the sea and I hear music - The sirens of Police no longer music - Water flowing under the bridge is music to me - In the silence of the dawn I hear music -- it's not an obsession you just can't say so 'cos I am bewitched and truly in love - I can't feel any noise any thoughts in my soul I can't feel any guilt any sorrow at all - The sound of the music is down on my feet - The sound of the silence is music to me - Blue birds in the tree and I'm feeling free blue birds in the tree and I'm feeling free - When I'm down I play on some music - When I'm out I play on some music - When I'm blue I play on some music - when I don't know what to do I play the guitar - Well I have no angel's voice but I sing along, I learnt less from teachers than I learnt from a song - I can't feel any noise, not a thought in my soul, I can't feel any guilt any sorrow at all